Music video rough cut: LR

WWW:

-Excellent first shot

-Great typography

-Good locations

-Use of jump cuts

-Lyrics on the text/writing

-Cutaways

-Home movie footage

-Repeated shots of friends together

-Excellent cinematography + good lighting

-Powerful image at end

-Editing matches pace

-Performance element

EBI:

-Faster editing at the start

-More cutaways

-Shoe branding

-Make the sections flow more together