Preliminary Exercise: Learner Response
1) Type up your teacher's feedback in full plus a summary of the comments you received from other students in the class.
2) Using a combination of your own reflection on the preliminary exercise and the feedback you were given, write three WWW bullet points and three EBI bullet points for your work.
WWW:
3) How effectively did you complete the objective you laid out in your mini preliminary exercise statement of intent?
I would say for the 30sec that I did it didn't turn out too bad. I did talk about the bedroom scene in my treatment and statement of intent.
4) What have you learned from the preliminary exercise that will help you in the actual coursework project?
I will need to add more shots to my scenes to make is seem more like a music video and I will focus on trying to fix the lighting. I also need to re shoot some scenes and fix the small mistakes.
5) Now you have completed the preliminary exercise, will you change anything about your actual coursework video plan? This could include your concept, cast/actors or technical elements such as mise-en-scene, camerawork or editing.
WWW:
-Good planning
-Two locations
-Narrative
-Lyrics in notebook
-Text messages
-Lighting in 1st shot, reflects mood
-Good concept
-Angles of cinematography
-Use of close-ups
EBI:
-More detailed shot list
-Better road location
-Attention to detail
WWW:
-Good camerawork
-Link between lyrics and visuals
-Research
EBI:
-Shotlist
-Lighting
-Alley way location
3) How effectively did you complete the objective you laid out in your mini preliminary exercise statement of intent?
I would say for the 30sec that I did it didn't turn out too bad. I did talk about the bedroom scene in my treatment and statement of intent.
4) What have you learned from the preliminary exercise that will help you in the actual coursework project?
I will need to add more shots to my scenes to make is seem more like a music video and I will focus on trying to fix the lighting. I also need to re shoot some scenes and fix the small mistakes.
5) Now you have completed the preliminary exercise, will you change anything about your actual coursework video plan? This could include your concept, cast/actors or technical elements such as mise-en-scene, camerawork or editing.
I will change the lighting as for some reason it went darker when published. I will also change a few of my locations and will add more actors in to make sure my music video can fulfil my concept.
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