Ignite presentation learner response

Learner response

1) Type up your feedback in full including the ratings out of five for each of the categories.

WWW:

-Good intro

-Good presentation style

-Good slides

-Well rehearsed + fluent

-Use of bullet points and good elaborating on those points

-Well designed

-Good images

-Trainer brand covered

-Good mise-en-scene: make-up, props, lighting etc

-Good setting idea

-Good magazine title

-Good representation and audience

-Blumler and Katz theory + Todorov  

-Good hand gestures 

-Good looking up

EBI:

-100 more words for statement of intent 

-Representation theory

-Explain why for camerawork and editing

-More explaining

2) Use this feedback, comments from peers and your own reflection on your presentation to self-assess and write your own detailed WWW and EBI for your coursework concept and presentation as a whole.

WWW:

-Well spoken, hand gestures and looking up at the audience

-Good slide preparation

EBI:

-Less pauses, keep talking and engaging with the audience

-More explanation

3) Write a paragraph discussing how your presentation will lead into your actual coursework production. Do you need to update your statement of intent? Does your concept offer enough clarity? Is it appropriate for the audience specified in the brief? Is it achievable to film with the resources you have available? Can you add media terminology or theory to your statement of intent now you have reflected on your presentation and seen others?

I need to update my statement of intent and make it longer so that it fits the word count and I should try adding more media theory and terminology in it. I would say it does target the audience which is mainstream music fans. I should be able to film with resources available as my music video is mostly going to be real life footage.