Cinematography feedback

1) Type up your feedback/comments from your teacher.

Teacher feedback:

WWW

• Creative- Film Noir
• Good music
• Good narrative
• Range of camera angles
• Good performance

EBI

• Lighting
• Editing

2) Type up your feedback from fellow students.

Student feedback:

WWW

• Great use of black and white
• Great editing
• Use of shots
• Film noir
• Felt like a narrative
• Correct shots
• Good location
• Steady camera
• Good titles
• Good camera work
• Music
• Camera movements

EBI

• Shaky hands
• Scale to fit

3) Now reflect on your work and write your own summary of the comments and feedback you have received. Write three WWWs and three EBIs.

Self assessment:

WWW

• Good use of film noir
• Variety of camera shots
• Music

EBI

• Steady hands
• Scale to fit

4) Learner response: think about what you learned about cinematography making the video and also watching others. What will you do differently when you start the coursework in the summer? What tips or tricks have you learned from others that you can use next time? Are there any specific aspects of camerawork that you need to revise or practice?

For my coursework, I will try use more different camera angles and try and make a narrative that actually makes sense. I also need to make sure the camera is more steady when filming.